Chains on Water
Creation of normalized societies
Making standards to our world
Organized rituals of education
Systems in our natural corporations
We are now all one in America
The there are the anti-standards
Those that stand from the rest
Money doesn't drive them
Influence they command
Turning those against the system
She is such a thing
Marking our minds with a glance
Her smile causing corporations to crumble
A dance that overcomes the rituals
She is a goddess of corruption
Her eyes deep in their trance
Innocent the look on her face
Yet her imagination spreads like wild flowers
Tender the smile she casts
The deception she plays
She is immortal
Moves that entice Aphrodite’s wrath
This is her charm
Life she controls
At least she does mine
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ok some people have given me some suggestions, one told me to name it "her" and another "She", someone else giveme some ideas on the name.
Here is another one given to me it "chains on water" well her reasoning for it is that "its refearing to her, how she controls u but not really"
ok last draft Puppet-mistress = Mat, Lives to Crumble = Muriel, "Steph's Mother" = Steph R. (will most likely never be called this)
Muah ha ha... That's innacurate, though. My mum doesn't control me much anymore. We should name it 'Lawrence's mother.'
After asking a few people about the existing names, they said they liked that one. so yeah you win, thats the name they picked.
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